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Plein Air: Below is my second attempt at painting Elk Lake Marina. I went back on a weekday and there were less people and dogs. I had all the intentions of using my support horizontally, but after a few thumbnail sketches, I decided to use it vertically. That did present some problems...it was top heavy....24" x 11" of 1/2" thick hardboard. Since I don't use an easel with watercolors, I had to find a tree stump that was at the right height and at the right location to help hold the long heavy support. The morning light was steamy, but the reflections were there, unlike my first visit (See Posting Sept. 7).. It was cold...it got down to 28* that night..in August..in Bend!!! Ouch....hence, my short visit.
I changed the composition by: painting only 4 boats, using a very limited palette and adding color to the boats (focal points are to have the color and the most contrast by painting the the dark water behind the boats).
Color Palette: I used only 2 colors for the main part of this painting...then added the colors for the boats. I used Joseph Zbukvic palette, but then only a few of his colors.
Help...This is not a Test !!!
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After arriving back home and looking at this painting for a few days, I decided that the composition may not be correct. It looked okay with my thumbnails. Perhaps, I painted to fast (about 30min) or when I got to the bottom half of the painting the support was harder to balance or I misjudged my composition (that's my vote)?
Below are 3 versions of cropping. Which one do you think is the best composition? Leave a comment.
Vote for:
A...Original Painting.
B...Little cropped off the bottom.
C...All of the bottom is cropped.
A
B
Vote...by leaving a comment (or e-mailing me).
My choice would be C.
ReplyDeleteNice painting. You captured the chilly day!
BG
I like the palette. I think I prefer C. The foreground does not take away from the focal point (boats)?
ReplyDeleteKaren
I vote for C, sometimes less is better. Nice painting.
ReplyDeleteMel
I agree-- C!
ReplyDeleteOK.... so the thing I like about C is not only the colors and the chilly look... it is also the fact that without the foreground it makes it feel as if the lake is bigger, and also makes me feel as if maybe I am in a boat looking from one to another....
ReplyDeletethat's my final two cents worth! ;0)
BG